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[Hiei's Girl]
Beyond

The world we see
We may live in for eternity
Gray of life
Full of hate
Saddened tears
Riddled with fears
Science rules our life
Or...so they say

Just look beyond
You'll find the place
Were fantasy and sci-fi
Are your fate

Were magic
Is the understanding for life
Your imagination rules your life
Secrets hidden
Behind your face
Become revealed in this place

Walk on a cloud
Fly in the sky
Live that life
You'll never cry

-Written in December 2004




[Shiver]
Killers 'n' Sinners
  The Devils

They're coming in the night
When you arranged your demons to fight
To other dimensions they let you fly
Watching you inconspicuous
Waiting for being lovely vicious
To brake your souls licious

You act the way you go
Hide that your blood can flow
For pleasure you hurt yourself slow
the answers are written in the steam
Like something you only see an the screen.

Snow covers the ground
Time is something you can't count
You loose control
The fear makes you shout it out loud
Firewater makes you crawl
That makes sure that you don't fall

You go out in the dark
It drives you to the grind
While you loose logic in a park
A flash built up your mind
And the hells hound start to bark

So cold you wake up from your grave
Seductive lust calls you damned name
You've lost everything faith
It's time to play a little game
Standing up to stand brave
Something makes you craving for pain.

Rip out her minds and regs
Penetrate her gently in blood
It becomes a ritual instead of sex
Then you feel so wired cut
You want perverted games of wax

In the nights slowly way
He comes down on earth
And orders you hierarchic to pray
You tell him about your birth
That's what you needed to say
You ain't got the nerve

Nothing can stop you
Running with his head
It's something like a cloud
You felt him as a dread
You establish your crew

Devils may hide in the shadows
Take you in the nights sun
Coming from bellows
We want to have some fun
Showing you the death Othello's
For your life you have to run




[Laín]
Haunted

She's clawing at my breast from deep inside. Scratching deep soars in my flesh.
She's screaming out loud in protest, and fills my head with her endless echoes of pain.
With a grim smile she sinks her hands in my heart and our blood becomes one.
Her longing fills my body with lust. I'm taken over, I'm longing, reaching, waiting...
Soon. Soon I wont be able to defeat her anymore, my strength will run dry. She hates being trapped,
it hurts..
it kills.




[..majo..]
Your love

Your lovely eyes
Your sweet smile
I can’t seem to remember them after a while

All I remember
Are all the sweet words you said
When you lay next to me in your bed

I tremble with every word
Every time I feel you lips
Or a touch by your fingertips

I need you, I want you, I love you
And I hope you feel the same
I hope you’re not playing a game

When it’s time for me to go
You beg me “Please stay”
But honey, I’ll never be far away

I’ll always be in your heart
Just hold me close, one more time
And let me end this silly rhyme




[Jinkx313]
Losing Us

It was early January and my worries were clear
The air was full of winter cheer

We sat together beside the fire
Little did I know, goings on would soon be dire

Soon it was June and the heat was intense
I found you hiding and your silence was dense

It was late August when I first saw you cry
I held you close but your tears did not dry

Halloween passed and you were still sad
I knew you had been fighting with your mom and step-dad

November passed in a rush of concern
Silence and solace you soon started to yearn

It was Christmas Day when I got the news
I saw you in hospital, cut, broken and bruised

You had felt that your life was a mess
Full of pain, neglect, depression and stress

A bridge you were on and a knife you had found
It was a jogger who saw you, lying motionless on the ground

Two months you spent not getting better 
The news of you death came to me in a letter

You were my love, my hope and my joy
Now you are gone, and you were just a young boy

I miss you so much my life is destroyed
All that is left is an empty void

I hold the gun up to my head
I think ‘why not?’ and use the knife instead

Now you are gone, as am I
We leave those behind wondering why

Two young lives were lost that night
And the moonlight glints off our gravestones shining pearly white…

- May 06, 2005




[Tear]
My Fallen Angel

You sit by a window watching the rain
You think you must be going insane
You see a flash
A bolt of light
And then you hear the sound
Of something hitting the ground

You run to the door to see what it is
But what you see
You can't believe
A winged figure
Laying still on the ground

This fallen angel
Has come to you
Now and forever
To help you through

Because this angel fell in love
With a demon from far below
A demon who has now bestowed
Upon this angel to live here on earth
To have his child
To give it birth
To give it life
His own flesh and blood
His own living child
And the angel he loves

But now this angel is deadly depressed
And madly obsessed
With finding a way
To get back home
So she won't be
Quite so alone...

- (c) Copyright Allen Karl Wong, Jr. Young poets Society 2003 all rights reserved.




[apocalypse7]
The Rosebush

The rosebush hides the sun,
as my soul has done for me,
I wish to tell her,
how I really feel and wish for her,
to be with me,
so I hold back my inner feelings,
locked so far away in my soul,
as my mind conjures,
thoughts of my wish,
which shall never come true,
unless I hurt or enlighten myself.

Fear,
the no,
no one wants it,
I feel the rose bush prick
the sun bleeding fore evermore,
holes to many already,
ten bleeding without ceasing,
so it will heal,
or another thorn goes in,
the most beautiful rose yet,
as the sun sets,
it feels the fear and darkness overcome it,
no knowing,
whether to share it's light,
once again,
with that beautiful rose,
and feel the perfect harmony again.




[Dragonix]
Chocolate Dreams

Such lovely scenery
Such deep mystery
Such a fucking fantasy

Frightening tears
That dwells inside
Deepened worries
Left to die

Softly spoken whispers
Chocolate covered hearts
Little girl that’s dreaming
Soul that’s torn apart

Smile now girl
And rip them open
Take their lives
With no regret

Bring them home
And take their heart
To your sweetened chocolate dreams
Where you fully tear apart.

- © Dragonix




[Gwendylyyn]
Trapped Within My Mind

I walk along these lonely streets,
Trapped here in my mind.
I've created my own prison,
Here within my mundane bind.

My soul cannot be freed,
And even as I sit here crying,
I know the world around me,
The world out there, is dying.

My mind wanders,
And my heart bleeds.
My existence renders,
All others to scream.

I curl up in my bed,
wrapped tight within the sheets.
My sister walks into the room,
And her scream echoes through me,
From my head down to my feet.

She's seen the bright red color,
Of the sheets wrapped tight around me.
She runs into the living room,
My death has taken its fee.

I can hear my mother screaming,
my sister out there crying,
knowing there's nothing they can do,
as I lay in my bed dying.

I think about the past,
here in my last moments;
It all flies by so fast,
And now I lay here with my torments.

My world slips away,
and I no longer hear them.
My thoughts begin to sway,
as I lay stuck here in my prison.

Even in death, they won't let me be.
I wish these thoughts were never mine;
And now I'm trapped here in my bind;
Trapped within my mind.

- (c) [Gwendylyyn] 11.10.04




[Stefano]
Less than nothing

Under the guise of friendship
he asked to meet.
With the pretense of empathy
did he lure me.
Feeling the need of understanding
I met him,
learned to trust him,
even to open my heart to him.
Then with the cold blade of carelessness
did he wound me.

And now I fear myself closing off,
becoming more calloused,
more fearful.

How I miss the innocence of my youth,
and the freedom with which I once faced the world.

Now there is only rain,
and bitter winds,
emptiness,
and the sense of being less
than nothing.




[Pyromaniac]
Valentine's Day

Valentines Day,
Is filled with love,
With all the hearts,
And the doves,

Valentines Day,
Nothings the same,
There are no tears,
And no pain,

Valentines Day,
I feel fresh and new,
'Cause on this day,
All I want is you




[Razberri]
Risen

A light beams down on her
The shadows slowly turn
Her heart racing once again
As her feelings begin to burn

Intoxicatingly beautiful
She races to find the end
But all she sees is that man
Who woke her once again

He loved her heart and body
Kept her warm and still
As she rocked back and forth
Holding images she longed to feel

Gave up the hurt and pain inside
To look for words to say
How she felt towards this man
Her every waking day.




[JoeysMonkey]
Me

As my flesh is ripped from the bone,
I wonder how I ended up being so alone...

They rip my tongue out so I can scream,
it slightly feels as if I'm in a hellish dream...

They throw my body in a pit,
and laugh as the match is lit...

The smell of burning flesh fills the night,
so wrong yet so right...

As I lie in my ash filled grave,
the road to hell I have paved...

For my killers were not foe but friend,
I wanted to die young never to reach the end...

For the pain was to great ,
there was no going back,
it was simply to late...

So as they push the dirt over me,
I hope everyone will forget all that I was,
and all that I was supposed to be...

Soon to forget the worst thing of all,
soon to forget,

Me...

- Written November 2004




[Star]
Untitled

I'm like a window
The glass is my heart
the wood is my
friends and family
holding me up
If I fall all is gone
but I will not
because my friends and family
will be there for me.




[Elisa]
My missing piece

The sun slowly rising, that is my heart burning.
The clear running water, that is my unselfishness.
The pure air, that is my need to live.

Like music you charm the sun to turn night into day.
With love you fill me with desire to endless give.
And your soul, is the missing piece that makes me whole.

You my love, are my sun.
You my love, are the clear water running through my veins to purify my soul.
You, are the air I breath to stand strong.

By looking into your eyes, you wash away my pain.
Your voice makes me calm.
And when you take me into your arms, safety fills my soul.

Surroundings disappear as you fill me with your love.
Loneliness is no more.
So to you my angel I give; my heart, my mind, my body and my soul.

- © Malin Persson 04-01-30

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2007-08-16 [Bookwyrm]: Mmm...yes...I think I'll implement that soon. ^_^

2007-08-16 [GlitchGames]: well i have various poetry but i perfer 2 show my luv poetry.i can write dark,1s about tha past,ect...

2007-08-16 [Bookwyrm]: Well, people will still be able to submit any type of poetry they want, however I would like to implement a theme to give people new ideas. Since there are so little submissions these days, the featured poem only changes once every two weeks. So with the current rate, we would have one non-theme poem featured and one theme poem featured each month. If the submission rate picks up, the featured poem may change each week, but I have a feeling it may not get that high again. Most people don't seem interested unfortunately.

2007-08-16 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: *sticks my tongue out* i submitted a lot of poems, so na!

2007-08-16 [Bookwyrm]: Yes, a lot of people have, but still...no one can say that there aren't fewer submissions these days.

2007-08-16 [Lyon Armonial the healer]: so go through older ones!

2007-08-16 [Bookwyrm]: I have been! But it would be EXTREMELY wonderful if we had more submissions. ^_^ I'd like to feature more members who are active. The past two featured poems came from currently inactive members, but the poems were beautiful so I featured them anyway.

2007-08-18 [dragonus]: well if it help's bring out other's muses to create emotion's and vision's through there poetry. I think it would be a good idea to make a theme for them and if you do it may bring other's in not just to see what's happening but may just let them start to think like a poet and create there own poem's to add so we get more in here. So I say go for it.

2007-08-18 [Bookwyrm]: -nods- Agreed. I'll start the new plan soon. ^_^

2007-08-18 [dragonus]: Cool but can I make a suggestion try to make it something that will make even the greatest poet's think makeing them dig deep into there syche to find the word's to best express it.

2007-08-18 [Bookwyrm]: ...It's a theme...it's not going to be something like "Write a poem about your best idea on how to fix the world." It's going to be simple like "nature" or "birthday" or something that's just different from what we normally get. Some will be deeper than others, but I'm not going to make it impossible. I actually want members to participate. Many members, not just the two who are willing to think that deeply. XD I do see what you mean, but I'm not going to make them work so hard that they don't want to do it.

2007-08-18 [dragonus]: Yea maybe that would be best because if they came in to check it out and had no idea as to what to even start with then they woulden't even particapate.

2007-08-18 [Bookwyrm]: Precisely. Unfortunately, the Elfpack members aren't typically on the same level as Elftown members. Not that they are less intelligent, but Elfpack is mostly "Elftown Rejects." They may have creativity, but they're not going to stress themselves to participate. So while I don't want to make it easy for them, I want to make it easier.

2007-08-18 [dragonus]: Basicaly instaed of just putting a rock in front of them to come up with what makes it beautiful to you,Your giving them a flower and asking them what do you feel when you look at it. Kinda

2007-08-18 [Bookwyrm]: In a sense, yes. ^_^

2007-08-18 [GlitchGames]: well i can make a poem on ne theme so i like that idea :D

2007-08-19 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: Mine are all depressing kind of, but I always welcome a challenge. =D

2007-08-19 [GlitchGames]: yep i luv challenges and writin a poem of a diff type weekly sounds fun 2 me

2007-08-19 [Mommie 2 Be♥]: You and me both.

2007-08-19 [GlitchGames]: yep :P

2007-08-19 [Bookwyrm]: Well, it's not going to be weekly, I don't think. I'm thinking of changing the "monthly submission" rule though, since we get so few submissions anyway.

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